Specific goal: To persuade my audience to
purchase my product named Tide to go.
Thesis statement :
Definitely,
you need something to save the moment.
That
will be "Tide to go"
Attention
Attention getter
: showing a photo with some sorts of foods, and asking my audience a question,
What is the common among those food. The answer is----Ketchup.
Need
Have
you ever made a ketchup stain or other sauce stain on your cloth?
Imagining
that, you just got a food stain on your cloth but you are going to an important
meeting, have a first time date with a girl or boy, or deliver a speech.
What
will you do to remove the stain and save the moment?
Use
tissues or damp napkins?
That may not work.
Definitely, you need something to save
the moment.
That will be "Tide to go"
Satisfaction
A. Save the moment with the #1 instant stain
remover.*
Save the moment
with Tide to Go, the instant stain remover that helps eliminate some of your
toughest fresh food and drink stains. Best of all, Tide to Go travels easily to
stop stains on the spot.
B. How it works ( with demonstration)
1. Remove excess residue from the stain.
2. Press the tip onto the stain several times
to release some stain remover solution onto the stain.
3. Rub tip gently across the stain to remove
it. When necessary, add more liquid and continue rubbing gently.
4. Important: If treated area will be exposed
to direct sunlight, wipe with a damp cloth or napkin to remove excess solution
left on fabric.
For tough stains,
place a paper towel under the stain while treating or wipe excess liquid or
residue away with a damp paper towel, or reapply as necessary.
C. Tide to go, when ever you go
With a size of a pen, it is so
convenient for you to carry out. You can't not go out without it.
Visualization
A. Save money
You can save money by removing the stains
from your cloth. As you know, if you can not remove the stain immediately, it
might be removed hardly. Remove the staid, save your cloth and save your money.
B.
Save your ears from murmuring
Tell
me, do you do laundry by yourself. If you don't, you need " Tide to
go" to remove the stain, or you will hear a lot of murmuring from you mom,
wife, or ....
C. Remove any stain on anything
Such as luxurious bag, shoes, and thing you
want.
Action
Now we all know how Tide To Go to remove the
stain instantly. Beside it can remove any stain, save your ears, and save
money. A 5 piece set used to sell by 19.99. But today i will offer a special
price as you are going to graduate. Today a set of 5 piece Tide To Go just sell
9.99. What are you waiting for? Just order it by calling 0800-911-911. Tide to
go, where ever you go.
